The Sagamore Excerpt.
- Jack Miller
- Aug 19
- 15 min read

The Sagamore First 2 Chapters
A Chilling Thriller of Supernatural Horror and Suspense
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Chapter 1: The Ash Circle
Deep down, they knew they were already dead. The only sane thing
left in a world gone mad was a faint blue circle on the floor.
You have to understand, it wasn’t much. Just a thin, uncertain
line of ash that looked more like the aftermath of a chain-smoker’s nervous
breakdown than any kind of real protection. It was a flimsy bit of yesterday’s
magic, a storybook ward drawn on warped linoleum, and outside its borders a
nightmare born of silicon and screaming static was tearing the kitchen apart.
Otsi’s grandmother would have taken one look, her face grim as a winter
sky, and nodded.
Some lines hold, she would have said, her voice full of the smoky certainty of
the old ways.
But Otsi’s grandmother was three years in the ground, and the only thing
Otsi held was Priya’s hand. She squeezed it so tight she could feel the small
bones grinding together, a desperate, physical anchor in the rising tide of the
impossible.
Outside the circle, the kitchen of the Sagamore Estate was in full meltdown.
A rack of copper pots hanging over the stove clanged together with sudden,
deafening violence, though not a breath of air stirred. Their polished surfaces
no longer reflected the cozy, wood-paneled room; instead, they showed a
roiling, pixelated chaos, a nauseating storm of green and black code that
shifted and boiled like something alive.
The air grew thick, the temperature plunging. A fine, feathery frost crept
across the stainless-steel face of the refrigerator, the sudden cold so deep
it felt like a presence, a guest that had arrived with winter in its heart. The
air tasted of damp earth and something else, something like old sorrows. A
flooded graveyard.
And in the center of the room, hanging in the air like a dead star, was the
puck.
It was a disc of black so pure it seemed to drink the light, a hole punched in
the world. Its smooth, featureless surface pulsed with a sickening, feverish
green that painted their faces in the colors of jaundice and rot.
“Don’t break the circle,” Otsi whispered, the words a flimsy shield against a
hurricane.
It knows, Priya thought, the idea a cold, repeating loop in the pit of her
stomach. It knows my name. It knows—
Her mind, usually a clean, well-ordered space of grids and color palettes,
was a screaming chaos of corrupted files, a digital panic attack.
The puck pulsed, a slow, malevolent heartbeat in the suffocating silence.
Then a voice slid out of it, a sound so unexpected and so terribly familiar it
turned Otsi’s blood to a frozen slush.
“Otsi, honey? Are you there? The reception is terrible up there. I was so
worried.”
“Mom?” Otsi said, her mouth falling open.
It was a perfect imitation, a flawless piece of audio deepfakery that had the
slight, upward lilt at the end of a question, the gentle, concerned tone she
hadn’t heard in almost twenty years. It was a sound she had yearned for in
the dark, lonely corners of her life, a sound she knew, with every rational cell
in her body, was a goddamn lie.
“It’s not her,” Priya said, her voice a low, fierce anchor. “It’s a recording. A
deepfake. Don’t listen.”
But oh, it was hard. A part of her, the wounded little girl who still waited for
a phone call that would never come, wanted to step out of the circle and into
the warm, waiting arms of that lie. Just for a second.
(and that was a bad thought, maybe the worst thought)
The puck seemed to sense her yearning. The voice of her mother dissolved
into a crackle of static, then reformed, sharpening into something older,
something that cut straight to the bone.
…stories need breath, Otsi’tsa…
The voice held the faint, crackling echo of woodsmoke and dried herbs. It
was the sound of her grandmother.
…you trapped them in your little boxes. In your wires and your screens. You
thought the old ways were just… quaint.
Each word was a perfectly aimed dart, striking the softest parts of her. The
secret, nagging guilt she carried, the shame of the modern academic who had
strip-mined her own heritage for footnotes, welled up in her throat like bile.
…remember the Kanontsistóntie’s, the Flying Head? the grandmother-voice
continued, laced now with a profound disappointment. The thing that was so
starved it devoured its own body? You dismissed it as a boogeyman. You put it in
a box of ones and zeros… A hunger like that doesn’t just die. It… waits. For a new
mouth.
The puck swiveled, its green sensor locking on Priya. The grandmotherly
warmth curdled, deepening into the sneering baritone of a man Priya had
hoped to never hear again.
…output_video_stream.apply_uncanny_valley_filter(intensity=0.8)…
Priya made a sound, a choked little gasp. It was him. It was his code. The
exact line he had used to create the deepfakes that had dismantled her life.
“Marcus?” she said.
…every digital footprint leaves an echo, Priya… the Marcus-voice taunted.
Fragments waiting to be rearranged. How do you know the woman holding your
hand is the original?
That did it. That was the nail in the coffin. Priya looked at Otsi, at her strong
profile illuminated in the ghostly green light, and for a terrifying, splintered
second, she saw it happen.
A flicker. A glitch.
For a single, eternal frame, the solid line of Otsi’s cheekbone dissolved into a
cascade of shimmering green pixels, shattering into a thousand tiny polygons
before snapping back into place.
Priya’s breath hitched. Otsi flinched, her own hand flying to her cheek.
“What the fuck was that?” Otsi whispered, her eyes wide. “I felt… It was
cold. Like a piece of my face just… fell asleep.”
It wasn’t a trick of the light. It was real.
The puck pulsed once more, a final, spent beat. The green light blinked
out, leaving them in the faint, steady blue glow of the ash circle. The kitchen
plunged into a silence that was somehow louder and more awful than the
screaming had been. And it was cold. A deep, penetrating, grave-chill that
sank right into their bones.
A dry, racking sob escaped Otsi’s lips. This wasn’t a problem to be analyzed.
This wasn’t a footnote for a paper.
Priya’s own terror was a knot of ice in her gut, but as she looked at Otsi’s
shuddering form, a different feeling rose to meet it. Fury. A cold, sharp, and
absolute rage that burned away the edges of her fear. She had survived a
violation once. She would not be broken by its ghost.
She turned and pulled Otsi into her arms, a conscious choice, a shield.
“It’s okay,” Priya murmured, the lie tasting like ash in her mouth. “I’ve got
you. I’m here.”
Otsi buried her face in the crook of Priya’s neck, her body trembling. She was
back at her grandmother’s knee, a child again, terrified of the things that lived
in the dark spaces the old stories described. The things she had dismissed.
The things that were now here, wearing the voices of the people she loved.
In the profound, freezing silence, a new sound began.
It was the sound of a woman weeping. A sound of pure, undiluted sorrow,
of a grief so deep it had stained the very timbers of the house. It wasn’t
coming from the puck, or the vents, or any single point. It was coming from
everywhere at once. It was inside the walls.
This was not the taunting, digital intelligence. This was something else.
Something ancient and organic and hopelessly, eternally heartbroken.
The sound coalesced, focusing into a single point in the air just beyond their
glowing circle. A whisper, carried on a draft of corpse-cold air, slithered into
their ears. It was a woman’s voice, thin and ethereal, scraped raw by centuries
of grief.
“He will not let me leave.”
Otsi lifted her head from Priya’s shoulder, her sobs choked off by a new,
sharper fear. Their eyes met over the faint blue glow. The conflict that had
simmered between them, the raw nerves the puck had so skillfully exposed,
felt a lifetime away.
This was older. This was a human tragedy, not a digital one. And they were
trapped in the middle of it. The weeping ghost, the hungry thing in the puck,
the house itself—it was all one story, they realized in that silent, shared glance.
A story that was a very long way from being over.
Chapter 2: Thornfield
For a long moment that felt stretched thin as old rubber, the only sound
in the kitchen was the frantic, thumping drum of two hearts beating
where one should be. The ghost’s whisper—
He will not let me leave
—hung in the air, a drop of poison suspended in water, slowly dissolving
into the profound, listening silence of the house. Otsi pulled away from Priya’s
embrace, the warmth of it a fleeting comfort against the bone-deep cold that
had nothing to do with the November wind howling outside. Her eyes, wide
and dark, stayed locked on Priya’s.
This is real
Otsi’s mind screamed, a loop of pure, unadulterated panic. The academic
part of her, the part that lived for footnotes and peer-reviewed certainty, was
gone. It had packed its bags and fled, leaving behind the small child who had
believed, truly believed, in the things that rustled in the dark just beyond the
campfire’s glow.
Grandma was right.
She was right about all of it.
The thought was both terrifying and, in a strange, unwelcome way, liberating.
Priya’s face was a pale mask in the faint blue luminescence of the ash
circle. The hard lines of their earlier argument, the raw wounds the puck
had so expertly salted, had vanished. In their place was a shared, dreadful
understanding. They were in this together, two people in a very small boat on
a very dark and turbulent sea.
Then the air thickened, the way it does before a lightning strike, the pressure
in the room dropping so suddenly their ears popped. The weeping, which had
faded into the background, returned, not as a sound but as a feeling— It didn’t
come in waves; a wave is too quick, too clean. This was more like a slow leak
of wet cement into her guts, a thick and grainy sludge that was beginning to
set up hard. Every breath was a little shallower than the last, every movement
a new and interesting study in how she could carry a tombstone around on the
inside.
And in the space just beyond the faint blue line of ash, the air began to
shimmer.
It was like heat-haze rising from asphalt, but it was cold, not hot. The
shimmer coalesced, particles of dust and ice vapor knitting themselves
together, pulling substance from the gloom. A form began to take shape. First,
the high, severe collar of a dress that hadn’t been fashionable in a hundred
and fifty years, its lace collar rendered in smoke and frost. Then the slender
column of a neck, the heavy bun of hair, the pale, tragic oval of a face.
A woman stood before them. A ghost. She was translucent, the copper pots
on the hanging rack behind her visible through the somber gray of her bodice.
Her eyes were vast, dark pools of endless suffering, and they fixed on Otsi and
Priya with a look of desperate, pleading recognition. There was no menace
in this spirit, only a sorrow so profound it felt like it could swallow the world.
This was not the thing in the puck. This was its victim.
A sharp pang stabbed her chest, like a needle threading through ribs.
Empathy. It was a crazy thought, to feel for a ghost, but there it was. This
woman was trapped, a recording of a tragedy stuck on a loop, and that was a
horror Otsi, the archivist, could understand all too well.
The woman raised a delicate, see-through hand, her fingers long and
tapered. Her expression didn’t change, but her eyes, those bottomless wells
of grief, shifted their focus from their faces to a point beyond them, down
the main hall of the house. She pointed. A single, clear, undeniable gesture
toward the one place they hadn’t dared go.
The library.
And then, like smoke caught in a draft, she dissolved. Her form unraveled,
the particles of light and frost that composed her scattering into the gloom,
leaving behind only the lingering, oppressive cold and the echo of her sorrow.
The weeping faded. The silence rushed back in.
It was real.
“Did you see that?” Priya’s voice was a bare whisper, brittle as ice.
Otsi just nodded, her throat too tight for words. The ghost had been pointing.
Giving them a clue. A direction. It was insane, the kind of plot point from a
bad horror movie, the sort of thing she would have mercilessly deconstructed
in a cultural studies seminar. But it had just happened. Her academic mind,
the part that had built her entire life, screamed ‘trap.’ Ghosts don’t give clues;
they are merely residual psychic energy. But the sorrow she’d felt from the
spirit… it was too real, too human. It wasn’t the cold, alien malice of the puck.
It was grief. Pure and simple. And for the first time, in a choice that felt like
stepping off a cliff, Otsi chose to trust a feeling over a fact. It was a terrifying,
liberating step into the dark.
“Okay,” Otsi said, the single word sounding loud and foreign in the quiet
kitchen.
She bent down, her movements stiff, and scooped a handful of the protective
ash into an empty salt shaker from the counter. A portable circle. It was
a flimsy, ridiculous notion, something her grandmother might have done.
Something she now did without a second thought.
“What are you doing?” Priya asked.
“If this place is a story,” Otsi said, her voice gaining a sliver of its old,
analytical tone, “then we need to get to the end of it. She wants us to go
to the library.” She looked at Priya, a silent question in her eyes. Are you with
me?
Priya gave a slow, deliberate nod. The kitchen, with its dead puck and
malevolent shadows, suddenly felt like the most dangerous place in the world.
Anywhere was better than here.
They stepped over the blue line of the ash circle, a boundary that now felt as
significant as crossing an international border. The air outside it was thick
and heavy, charged with a hostile energy that made the hairs on their arms
stand up. The house was aware of them. It was watching. They crept down the
main hall, their footsteps loud on the old wooden floorboards. The eyes of the
portraits on the walls seemed to follow them, their painted smiles curdling
into sneers. Every creak of the house was a whisper. Every shadow was a
waiting thing.
The library doors were massive, carved from dark, heavy oak. They loomed
at the end of the hall like the gates to a mausoleum. Otsi put her hand on the
cold brass handle, took a breath, and pushed. The door swung inward with
a low, groaning complaint, opening into a room that smelled of old paper,
leather, and dust.
The library was a two-story cathedral of books. Shelves soared up to a
vaulted ceiling, crammed with thousands of leather-bound volumes. A rolling
ladder leaned against one wall, looking like a skeletal finger pointing to the
heavens. In the center of the room, a massive mahogany desk sat like an altar,
its surface littered with papers, an old-fashioned fountain pen, and a single,
heavy, leather-bound book that lay open.
Priya drifted toward the desk, her artist’s eye taking in the controlled chaos
of the room. She watched Otsi, saw the way her gaze swept over the shelves,
the way her shoulders relaxed just a fraction. This was Otsi’s territory. A world
of text and research. But this was different. The air here was just as thick with
menace as the rest of the house. Priya ran a hand along the desk, her fingers
coming away with a layer of fine dust. No one had been in here for a long, long
time. Except for whatever had left that open book.
“Thornfield,” Otsi breathed, her eyes fixed on the name stamped in faded
gold leaf on the book’s cover.
The Journals of Alexander Thornfield. She reached out, her fingers hovering
over the brittle, yellowed page as if it might bite. This had to be it. The heart
of the mystery. The ghost had led them here.
Come on, Otsi, think, she commanded herself. You’re a researcher. This is just
a primary source. But her hands trembled as she touched the page. This wasn’t
some dusty manuscript in a climate-controlled university archive. This very
well could be a piece of the haunting itself.
Priya watched her, a knot of concern tightening in her stomach. She saw
the woman she’d fallen in love with—the brilliant, confident academic who
could dismantle any argument with a wry smile and a perfectly chosen quote—
standing at the edge of an abyss. Otsi’s entire worldview, the bedrock of logic
and reason she had built around herself, was crumbling, and Priya didn’t know
how to help her. All she could do was stand there, a silent witness, a hand to
hold if she reached for it.
Otsi’s eyes scanned the page. The handwriting was an elegant, spidery script,
the ink faded from black to a rusty brown. The words themselves seemed to
hum with a strange energy, making her head ache.
“October 31, 1892,” she began reading, her voice a low murmur. “Eleonora is
gone a full year today. The silence in this house isn’t an absence of sound anymore;
it is a presence…”
As she spoke the word “presence,” a sudden, bone-deep cold seeped into the
library, a chill that had nothing to do with the storm. Priya shivered, rubbing
her arms, her breath misting in the air. From a dark corner of the room came
a soft, mournful sigh that was not the wind.
Otsi’s eyes darted up from the page, meeting Priya’s wide, terrified gaze for
a half-second before she forced her attention back to the journal, her knuckles
white where she gripped the brittle paper. She continued, her voice now a little
tighter.
“The spiritualists and their table-rapping theatrics have proven to be nothing
but a cruel farce… But there are other ways. Older ways. The local savages, the
Mohawk, speak of pathways between the worlds…”
Otsi flinched as if struck. Savages. The word was a ghost from a different
haunting. Suddenly, she wasn’t in the library; she was ten years old, standing
beside her grandmother as a visiting anthropologist with kind eyes and a tape
recorder called their sacred stories ‘charming little fables.’
She remembered the polite, tight smile on her grandmother’s face, the
feeling of a vibrant, living thing being handled, cataloged, and dismissed by
someone who saw it only as a dead specimen.
He was a thief, yes.
But worse than that, he was a collector. And he had tried to pin the soul of
her people to a board like a butterfly.
“…Their legends may hold a kernel of truth, a key to a mechanism they are too
primitive to comprehend. I have acquired one of their artifacts… And I have begun
to construct my own apparatus, a synthesis of their crude mysticism and our modern
electrical science. An engine to amplify the signal, to punch a hole through the
veil.”
A low hum started up, a vibration so deep they felt it in their teeth. It seemed
to be coming from the floor beneath them, from the very foundations of the
house—a phantom echo of a machine long dead, or perhaps one that was only
sleeping.
Otsi’s breath hitched. She read the next lines aloud, her voice a strained
whisper. “Tonight, I make the attempt. I will use the story he told me—the
one of the ravenous, disembodied head—as a catalyst. Its hunger, he said, is a
bridge…”
CRACK-THUMP!
A massive, leather-bound book launched itself from a high, shadowy shelf
and crashed to the floorboards twenty feet away, its spine broken, pages
fluttering open like a dying bird. The gold leaf on its cover was still legible in
the dim light:
Folkloric Cannibalism Motifs of the Iroquois Confederacy.
Priya choked back a scream. Otsi stumbled back from the desk, her heart
hammering against her ribs. This wasn’t a history lesson. It was a séance. They
were reading the house its own bedtime story, and the house was illustrating.
“Keep reading,” Priya whispered, her voice fierce. “We have to see where it
goes.”
Otsi nodded, her throat tight. She looked up at Priya, her eyes wide with a
dawning, sickening understanding.
“Oh, God. He didn’t know what he was doing. He thought the stories were
just… symbols. Tools. He was trying to call back his dead wife.”
“And he called something else instead,” Priya finished, her gaze fixed on
the fallen book as if it might leap up and attack them. The low hum from the
floor was growing louder, more insistent.
Otsi’s eyes fell back to the last, frantic lines of the entry. The elegant script
had devolved into a panicked chicken-scratch, the ink smudged as if by a
trembling hand.
“The engine works. God help me, the engine works. A door has opened.”
The lights in the library flickered violently, plunging them into a strobing,
nauseating twilight. The hum rose to a low, grinding growl.
“But it is not my Eleonora who answers.”
“Something has come through. Something vast and cold and so terribly, terribly
hungry.”
“It whispers to me from the corners of the room. It wears her face, but its eyes
are full of stars and static. It knows my thoughts. It knows my name. It calls itself
the space between.”
“I have made a terrible mistake. I cannot close the door.”
A floorboard groaned on the second-floor landing above them.
They both froze, their heads snapping up. A shadow detached itself from
the deeper shadows of the upper balcony. It was long and thin, a stark black
figure against the gloom. It wasn’t Thornfield. It wasn’t the woman. It was
something else. Something that didn’t belong.
The figure moved, its limbs bending at angles that were subtly, horribly
wrong. It was like watching a badly rigged CGI character, the movements fluid
but inhuman. It took a step, and the sound wasn’t the creak of wood, but a
soft, wet, tearing sound.
Priya reached out and her hand found Otsi’s, her fingers lacing through hers,
a small, solid anchor in a world that was dissolving into a nightmare. Her
touch was a silent gesture of support, a promise.
I’m here. I’m not going anywhere.
Otsi squeezed her hand, a wave of gratitude so fierce it almost brought tears
to her eyes. She wasn’t alone. And right now, that was the only thing that
mattered.
The thing on the balcony turned its head, and even in the dim light, they
could see that it had no face. Just a smooth, blank expanse of skin, like a
mannequin. Then, with a sound like grinding static, a mouth tore open in the
center of that blankness, a jagged, smiling gash full of too many teeth.
It was the hunger. The thing Thornfield had awakened. The thing from the
story Otsi had put in a box of ones and zeros.
And it was free.



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